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更多发布于：2012-01-30 20:40

桃花坞

淡淡烛光，照一地枯黄。
门外雨下，谁撑伞张望。
花已楼，谁在唱，哭哑了嗓。
小屋旁，柳湖边，已照不出当年的模样。
桃花坞，月老入，一段红绳，又将谁与谁捆绑？

去年八月份写的，然后一直忘记发上来。

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发布于：2012-01-30 22:10

覺得少了點什麼卻又說不出

不過整體不錯—W—

Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at the close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray, Do not go gentle into that good night, Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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发布于：2012-01-31 11:24

果然是女生

[color=Red][b]我想，消失在红尘中，也许是我最好的归宿。[/b][/color] [img]http://www.ourdmworld.net/data/attachment/forum/201302/07/124541aj4jwmm7ytrd7jmr.jpg[/img]

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